Been following this game for a while and just played through it a few times and this is exactly what I wanted. Kara is so great, really looking forward to future updates and the Steam release to see more Kara.
Its crazy how good this was for your first game. The writings had me chuckling and the art was real pretty, cant wait to see what more you got in store for us. (after a well deserved nap of course)
I found a small bug and it only took me under a minute from first launch xD . When you try to adjust text speed setting game crashes (it's reproducible, tried it a couple of times with the same result).
EDIT: Other than that everything's fine, keeping in mind that's your first game it still feels more like a prologue chapter than a full-fledged game. Every aspect works together great and manages to create the right atmosphere for the situation. The only thing that I didn't like is how the "kiss" choice (the one that's on bed) was made unavoidable and that it chose itself, it wasn't a great way to move story along (it feels like there's better ways to proceed than this, but I suspect that it's that way because of crunch and\or fatigue). In conclusion you did great (game achieves the thing it's going for and that's good), keep on keeping on.
I'll make a note of the text speed glitch and get to work on it! As for the writing it was a time thing, but I'm planning on expanding the scope of the game/adding in cut content for a steam release!
Honestly was a bit disappointed, played the patreon version and expected a lot more content, seems like a demo more than anything.
I suppose I set my expectations too high but it really wasnt bad. Art is still good, has some replayability with some funny lines and I still like the character, just not a lot of substance as far as visual novels go.
There was unfortunately a lot of content that had to be cut for time's sake. But in the coming months I'll be working on adding the cut content back in for a release on steam!
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There are plans to make more NSFW scenes in the future?
Probably not. Maybe lewd but not fully NSFW. There's a bath scene that was cut from the game that I wanna add back in for steam tho!
Really fun game, would love to see a longer game one day with more dates in the future, you've got a talent for writing cute neet characters ^.^
Been following this game for a while and just played through it a few times and this is exactly what I wanted. Kara is so great, really looking forward to future updates and the Steam release to see more Kara.
I literally created an account just to be able to play this game, I've been waiting for it for a long time, Hitsuji if you see this, I love your art.
Its crazy how good this was for your first game. The writings had me chuckling and the art was real pretty, cant wait to see what more you got in store for us. (after a well deserved nap of course)
so awes.ome so co ol-....
I found a small bug and it only took me under a minute from first launch xD . When you try to adjust text speed setting game crashes (it's reproducible, tried it a couple of times with the same result).
EDIT: Other than that everything's fine, keeping in mind that's your first game it still feels more like a prologue chapter than a full-fledged game. Every aspect works together great and manages to create the right atmosphere for the situation. The only thing that I didn't like is how the "kiss" choice (the one that's on bed) was made unavoidable and that it chose itself, it wasn't a great way to move story along (it feels like there's better ways to proceed than this, but I suspect that it's that way because of crunch and\or fatigue). In conclusion you did great (game achieves the thing it's going for and that's good), keep on keeping on.
I'll make a note of the text speed glitch and get to work on it! As for the writing it was a time thing, but I'm planning on expanding the scope of the game/adding in cut content for a steam release!
10/10
Hi Hitsuji! Can you confirm whether there's any NSFW/if this is stream safe?
It's all PG-13 and therefore stream safe.
EDIT: I think there's ONE topless doodle of Kara in the credits so just skip the credits if you play it on stream.
As short as this game is, I had fun the entire time. Kara is just a fun character to talk with. I look forward to future updates!
Honestly was a bit disappointed, played the patreon version and expected a lot more content, seems like a demo more than anything.
I suppose I set my expectations too high but it really wasnt bad. Art is still good, has some replayability with some funny lines and I still like the character, just not a lot of substance as far as visual novels go.
There was unfortunately a lot of content that had to be cut for time's sake. But in the coming months I'll be working on adding the cut content back in for a release on steam!