I found a small bug and it only took me under a minute from first launch xD . When you try to adjust text speed setting game crashes (it's reproducible, tried it a couple of times with the same result).
EDIT: Other than that everything's fine, keeping in mind that's your first game it still feels more like a prologue chapter than a full-fledged game. Every aspect works together great and manages to create the right atmosphere for the situation. The only thing that I didn't like is how the "kiss" choice (the one that's on bed) was made unavoidable and that it chose itself, it wasn't a great way to move story along (it feels like there's better ways to proceed than this, but I suspect that it's that way because of crunch and\or fatigue). In conclusion you did great (game achieves the thing it's going for and that's good), keep on keeping on.
I'll make a note of the text speed glitch and get to work on it! As for the writing it was a time thing, but I'm planning on expanding the scope of the game/adding in cut content for a steam release!
Honestly was a bit disappointed, played the patreon version and expected a lot more content, seems like a demo more than anything.
I suppose I set my expectations too high but it really wasnt bad. Art is still good, has some replayability with some funny lines and I still like the character, just not a lot of substance as far as visual novels go.
There was unfortunately a lot of content that had to be cut for time's sake. But in the coming months I'll be working on adding the cut content back in for a release on steam!
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I found a small bug and it only took me under a minute from first launch xD . When you try to adjust text speed setting game crashes (it's reproducible, tried it a couple of times with the same result).
EDIT: Other than that everything's fine, keeping in mind that's your first game it still feels more like a prologue chapter than a full-fledged game. Every aspect works together great and manages to create the right atmosphere for the situation. The only thing that I didn't like is how the "kiss" choice (the one that's on bed) was made unavoidable and that it chose itself, it wasn't a great way to move story along (it feels like there's better ways to proceed than this, but I suspect that it's that way because of crunch and\or fatigue). In conclusion you did great (game achieves the thing it's going for and that's good), keep on keeping on.
I'll make a note of the text speed glitch and get to work on it! As for the writing it was a time thing, but I'm planning on expanding the scope of the game/adding in cut content for a steam release!
10/10
Hi Hitsuji! Can you confirm whether there's any NSFW/if this is stream safe?
It's all PG-13 and therefore stream safe.
EDIT: I think there's ONE topless doodle of Kara in the credits so just skip the credits if you play it on stream.
As short as this game is, I had fun the entire time. Kara is just a fun character to talk with. I look forward to future updates!
Honestly was a bit disappointed, played the patreon version and expected a lot more content, seems like a demo more than anything.
I suppose I set my expectations too high but it really wasnt bad. Art is still good, has some replayability with some funny lines and I still like the character, just not a lot of substance as far as visual novels go.
There was unfortunately a lot of content that had to be cut for time's sake. But in the coming months I'll be working on adding the cut content back in for a release on steam!